I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Cody you have written an exciting and action packed story. Your use of adjectives is great and you have attempted some similes. You have followed your plan well.
Cody you have written an exciting and action packed story. Your use of adjectives is great and you have attempted some similes. You have followed your plan well.
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